Score: 4

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submission: 10 Seconds With Jesus

date: November 22, 2006

The graphics for this piece of work were very good. If you actually used these graphics in a longer piece of work, it would end up being a very good movie. The graphics were perfectly acceptable, but the sound made me cringe, as well as the lame pun that you presented at the end. However, it could make a cute e-card or something. Work harder, and make a flash with a storyline and some humour in it.

Score: 10

"Good job!"

submission: The Random Collab

date: November 20, 2006

Good job guys! Very funny parts from everyone!

The Soul Man- Random, pretty funny. :) Didn't really like the stick man, but I laughed. :D

Drunken- Very random. Funny ending. Good graphics.

Rena- Hillarious. I didn't see that coming. Lawl, good job Rena.

Diver- I was thinking, WTF? But there was a funny ending.

Rena 2- I didn't really get that, but at least your graphics are improving by heaps. :D

Dumbass Dude- Funny part, good background graphics and good idea. Well done. :D

Awesome guys. :D

Score: 10

"M-botmademewritethissoitwouldntgetremoved"

submission: Toilet Fetus

date: November 6, 2006

My mental health gradually declines after every single cartoon I watch that's made by you. :o Good job, I guess? There were good graphics, a funny storyline, some quality voice acting in there, and most of all, quite an original concept. I commend you on thinking up of such a good idea.

Score: 10

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submission: The Bad Animation

date: October 28, 2006

We have quite a nice submission here. Its strengths are in its humour. :D

The Graphics:
The graphics are simple, but intentional. There aren't much good points about the animation though. 2/10.

The Style:
The style of the simple animation was done well, made to look very n00bish. I think you captured it well. 5/10.

The Sound:
The sound was a good part of the animation. The soundtrack in the start was nice, and fit with the warning of the animation. Your voice acting was clear, which means either you put some effort into it or you are just naturally talented. :P

The Humour:
The Humour was one of the main things that saved this flash. I found the whole thing to be quite funny, and I thought you must have put thought into it. 10/10

Overall: 10/10 for the humour and the sound. :D

Score: 10

"Hillarious"

submission: Awesome N00bday Flash

date: October 24, 2006

Drunken, you are very good at making random stuff funny. Great job. The graphics seemed a tad rushed, but they added to the humour. Well done, Happy N00bday!

Score: 10

"Well done guys!"

submission: N00bDay Collab

date: October 24, 2006

Well done guys!

Rena: Pretty cute. I liked the graphics and stuff, but it er... didn't really have a point to it. Well done anyway!
Soul: Pretty funny, the graphics were nice. What's the name of that looping song? That's pretty cool. Well done!
JWald: Strange... nice song though.
Queen: Hillarious. You are a comic genius. The graphics were... a tad lazy, but I guess it was intended and used very well. Funny as, well done. :D

Good job!

Score: 3

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submission: Retarded Animal Babies 17

date: October 23, 2006

Dave, I was a fan of your earlier work, but as of recently, I seemed to have enjoyed the series less. I think this is because of a few things, perhaps you've pushed the potential of the characters in the series to the limit, the idea is running old or the jokes just aren't funny any more. While the technical aspects are relatively impressive and the effort put in was huge, there was nothing in here that really impressed me here.

The animation was good, but not as good quality as some of the best stuff that you see on the site, for obvious reasons, as this isn't intended to show off your animation skills. You seemed to have made this cartoony-style animation as good as it can get, and I must congratulate you on the effort that you put into something like this. The sound production of this short animation must have had some large effort put into it, and I credit you for that.

However, nothing in the whole flash animation seemed to amuse me. The jokes were too predictable and there were far too blatantly-full-out sex jokes, and characters randomly spurting out words. The earlier movies in this series made me laugh, because they didn't rely on the characters randomly shouting out 'poop' or crude visual gags. Sure, they had some, but they were not so overused to the extent of this episode that they actually had some humour value. But with this one, practically all of the jokes were like this, and I thought it was a bit of a bore to sit through. You used to (or at least it seemed like it) put more care into your gags, and they actually worked.

I honestly did not like this episode. I appreciate the time and care that you put into this, but I found that there was nothing enjoyable in this flash.

Score: 10

"yay!"

submission: NG Review Game #1

date: October 5, 2006

Great job! I thoroughly enjoyed the game! I thought the idea was good, and I especially liked the nice little editing that you put into the rest of the 'Flash Portal' page.

The only thing you should work on is the drawing. But other than that. Cool! Well done. :D

Score: 8

"Great"

submission: Horny

date: September 29, 2006

Well, your graphics aren't terribly outstanding, some of the drawings were rough and a bit out of place, but besides from that, I thought it was great!

I must commend you on the effort that you put into your flash, as well as the determination you had to finish it, because the end result was very good.

The track that you used I quite liked, and I think you could really entertain a lot of people with the humour that you put into this flash.

Overall, a very good effort. Work on the graphics a bit, and the end result will be great!

Score: 3

"bLeh"

submission: Jerries Actoin Thiler

date: September 28, 2006

The idea's running pretty old. At first, the novelty and the pure amateur touch to the flash made it funny. The first one I saw I found hillarious, and I put it on my favourites list. But as new ones came out, because the same things were repeated over and over again, it got less and less enjoyable. There is absolutely no originality to it anymore, the cartoons don't get interesting and there aren't any funny things going on anymore.

However, I know this is in good fun, but I think this idea is getting quite old. I think you'll find that the more and more Jerry Jackson cartoons you'll release, the more and more harder it will be to please fans. Perhaps consider stopping while you're still ahead?